Tuesday, 20 March 2012

ALL- Rough Cut 6 Feedback

Audience: We showed this version of the rough cut to members of our A2 media class (all aged 17/18years old). This is an ideal audience to show the rough cut to because it fits within our primary target audience for the music video of 15-24year olds. Our teacher also gave us some feedback on this version of our music video and he in in keeping with our secondary target audience.

  • check the frame size is consistent throughout
  • check lipsyncing lines up fully
  • (0.21s) 'we were free' layering - playful footage
  • Robbie walking up the steps - random. Only use once. first shot too short?
  • Break performance up - window <3 shot?
  • some shakiness which needs to be edited out or deleted
  • (1.11s) drum - edit to the beat
  • (1.21s) frame boys face better, get rid of girls hand from the corner
    • also crossfade with the following shot
    • motion tab - ask for help? 100% in point, 0% out point
  • split 2 shot up where licking the spoon - add robbie
    • shakes whilst licking lips - delete
  • phone shot is too random, doesn't fit
  • space in the sky and train - link phone in on a layer
  • blowing out the candles - put where the track really slows down and almost stops
  • end - use the candle being blown out rather than the light being turned off
  • layer kids on concrete for CU of feet at station
  • (2.10-2.11s) shakes
  • (2.13-2.14s) edit to the beat when percussion comes in
  • flare effects
  • 'flying' something knocked over/being thrown
  • train set - link with the older gen on the train
  • train set - big shake - slow down more to solve?
  • oldest gen - hands on bum - creepy? takes away from the mood of the song
    • not innocent (take out)
  • dancing gen1 layer with Josh gen 2 - multiple layers 3or4 - resize and reposition them
  • speed up dancing ^
  • whale 'looks like hes having a sexual encounter with the carpet' - either delete or layer the same shot over and over again
  • layer the girls face over the rocks during performance shots
  • in bed together - not innocent - wear pjs
  • more shot variety for the Robbie performance shots

1 comment:

  1. at least hyperlink the vid being discussed

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